Post by anyril on Nov 19, 2005 1:40:22 GMT -5
this is a start of a battle story fic i started to write and was look ing for some advice.
Disclaimer: I do not own zoids and this is not being done to profit off of them.
P.S. for any Other former military people or military buffs out their i appologise for the poorly written op-order
Max sat quietly in her gun sniper watching through the scope for her opponent to show up. As a top rated sniper it was something she was use to and she had located the perfect spot. She was just inside the wood line of a hard wood forest atop a hill that over looked a grassy knoll. Just as she was wondering if she was even going to get any action a black zoid appeared in her scope it looked like a cross between a basic liger zero and a zero x. She noticed that it had not appeared on any of her sensors prior to its appearance but that really didn’t matter much to her since she had locked in on it and was about to squeeze the trigger when she yelled over her comms, “bang you are dead!” “Good job” was the reply that came over the speakers. Just then the republic army coordinator broke into the communication before anything could be said, “The training session has ended please return to the base the Colonel wants to see you both.” “Roger that base,” they both replied as the met up in the knoll, and started back toward the base.
After about an hour Max had finally parked her zoid and finished the post operations checks and when she climbed out of the cockpit. Lieutenant Maxine Harris was about 5’8” tall and weighed about 160 lbs. with an athletic build; she had long red hair and ice blue eyes. She was met at the foot of her zoid by her partner Captain Alex Wood who was about 5’10” and 190 with a fairly muscular build he was blond with steel gray eyes. The two of them were considered to be one of the best recon teams in the republic. After handing their maintenance reports the hanger chief they made their way to battalion headquarters where they were supposed to meet with the Colonel.
On the way to the Colonel’s office they had speculated about what the old man wanted both figuring that they were about to be sent out on another mission. After knocking and being permitted into the Colonel’s office they could see the colonel sitting at his desk with a sour look on his face and also noticed that there were two people in imperial uniforms in the room as well. As they entered the room and saluted the Colonel as was protocol “Cpt. Alex wood and Lt. Maxine Harris reporting as ordered” Alex addressed the colonel. “You can relax” the colonel said as he returned their salute. I would like to introduce you to Colonel Pool and Lt. Sara Petrova of the Guylos Imperial Army. Lt. Petrova and the two of you have been assigned to work together in a joint Imperial and Republic Task force that will be conducting recon on the central continent.
Here are is the written op-order (operations order) please read it over and ask any questions. Alex and Max both took a moment to look over the order which was broken up in standard format.
Situation: Enemy forces seem to be securing a dig site.
Size of the force is unknown.
Enemy mission is unknown.
Enemy equipment is unknown.
Mission: Ascertain enemy size
Strength of the enemy
Motivations of the enemy
Equipment: Liger Zero with Shadow CAS
Gun sniper with standard armaments
Hel-kat with improved stealth capabilities
Support: Supply drop at designated coordinates every 48 hours
Imperial Air Support on stand you for emergency evacuation.
Command: Chain of command as follows
Cpt Alex Wood
Lt Sara Petrova
Lt Maxine Harris.
The only question asked was the speculations on the enemy’s objectives at the dig site. According to Colonel Pool that is what has the intelligence sections of both military’s confused. To all knowledge there was nothing of any value in the area of the dig site.
Following the briefing the three new team Members went to the zoid hanger to begin pre mission checks on their zoids.
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Disclaimer: I do not own zoids and this is not being done to profit off of them.
P.S. for any Other former military people or military buffs out their i appologise for the poorly written op-order
Max sat quietly in her gun sniper watching through the scope for her opponent to show up. As a top rated sniper it was something she was use to and she had located the perfect spot. She was just inside the wood line of a hard wood forest atop a hill that over looked a grassy knoll. Just as she was wondering if she was even going to get any action a black zoid appeared in her scope it looked like a cross between a basic liger zero and a zero x. She noticed that it had not appeared on any of her sensors prior to its appearance but that really didn’t matter much to her since she had locked in on it and was about to squeeze the trigger when she yelled over her comms, “bang you are dead!” “Good job” was the reply that came over the speakers. Just then the republic army coordinator broke into the communication before anything could be said, “The training session has ended please return to the base the Colonel wants to see you both.” “Roger that base,” they both replied as the met up in the knoll, and started back toward the base.
After about an hour Max had finally parked her zoid and finished the post operations checks and when she climbed out of the cockpit. Lieutenant Maxine Harris was about 5’8” tall and weighed about 160 lbs. with an athletic build; she had long red hair and ice blue eyes. She was met at the foot of her zoid by her partner Captain Alex Wood who was about 5’10” and 190 with a fairly muscular build he was blond with steel gray eyes. The two of them were considered to be one of the best recon teams in the republic. After handing their maintenance reports the hanger chief they made their way to battalion headquarters where they were supposed to meet with the Colonel.
On the way to the Colonel’s office they had speculated about what the old man wanted both figuring that they were about to be sent out on another mission. After knocking and being permitted into the Colonel’s office they could see the colonel sitting at his desk with a sour look on his face and also noticed that there were two people in imperial uniforms in the room as well. As they entered the room and saluted the Colonel as was protocol “Cpt. Alex wood and Lt. Maxine Harris reporting as ordered” Alex addressed the colonel. “You can relax” the colonel said as he returned their salute. I would like to introduce you to Colonel Pool and Lt. Sara Petrova of the Guylos Imperial Army. Lt. Petrova and the two of you have been assigned to work together in a joint Imperial and Republic Task force that will be conducting recon on the central continent.
Here are is the written op-order (operations order) please read it over and ask any questions. Alex and Max both took a moment to look over the order which was broken up in standard format.
Situation: Enemy forces seem to be securing a dig site.
Size of the force is unknown.
Enemy mission is unknown.
Enemy equipment is unknown.
Mission: Ascertain enemy size
Strength of the enemy
Motivations of the enemy
Equipment: Liger Zero with Shadow CAS
Gun sniper with standard armaments
Hel-kat with improved stealth capabilities
Support: Supply drop at designated coordinates every 48 hours
Imperial Air Support on stand you for emergency evacuation.
Command: Chain of command as follows
Cpt Alex Wood
Lt Sara Petrova
Lt Maxine Harris.
The only question asked was the speculations on the enemy’s objectives at the dig site. According to Colonel Pool that is what has the intelligence sections of both military’s confused. To all knowledge there was nothing of any value in the area of the dig site.
Following the briefing the three new team Members went to the zoid hanger to begin pre mission checks on their zoids.
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