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Post by Zar_Wolf on Aug 13, 2004 17:54:38 GMT -5
This is my first fan fic and i worked hard on it so please tell me what you think of it.(its a little short) -Arya ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Prologue The year is 2055, the Zoid Wars Continue. The Humans(who help) call us Zoidians, yet in many years we may be called Ancient Zoidians. For years, decades, the three sides have fought. The First wars where between the Helic Republic and the Zenebas Empire. Then about two years ago,a new enemy appeared, the Guylos Empire. All i know is that whenever a unit, or base runs into them; its destroyed and every man Killed. -Arya
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Post by Tilly on Aug 13, 2004 21:07:26 GMT -5
That sounds more like a summary, to be honest. You should really add more detail to it, or group it in with the rest of the fic-it's too short to stand on its own, in my opinion.
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