Post by Big Sazabi on Aug 12, 2004 10:35:55 GMT -5
I was reading some of the others and thought what the heck, why don't I give it a shot.
So heres mine. Sorry about the spelling. I don't have Microsoft Word.
It was a hot day out. Republican soldiers all laying around doing nothing.
I Asual. A boy at a age of 14 and just able to join the Republican Army just got my orders to meat up with my team at a town called Thunder village. It was a small quite little place that sat on the edge of the Republic and the Neo-Zenevas Border. It was a peacefull little town about to be caught up in a battle for a rare zoid. THE MADTHUNDER. I just arrived when the news went out that some arceolgist just unearthed something meraculus. It was a Madthunder. Both The Zenevas and republicv wanted this zoid. I staired at it in amusment. It was a huge zoid. After all the camotion settled down I reported to my squad leader. In his tent he had all sorts of stuff. Pictures of him as a little boy pilioting his first zoid with his father to Him leading a fully armed batalion of a Gojulas MK II, about 12 Godos armed with CP-13's, four Green horn, and about 7 or 8 different Command Wolfs. He look like he was a great leader. But when I saw him he was in what it looked like to be a white t-shirt with torn-to-shreds blue jean shorts on, a gote that conected with his mustash. On his hat that he wore it said "Captian Brooke". I walked up to his desk and handed him my papers. He looked at me and said "So, your the fresh meat, right out of the academy. Says here your name is Asual right?" I snaped him a crisp solute and said "Yes sir" in a clear voice. He caulked a eye brow and said "Losen up, nothens happened around here for years son."
I could tell I was in for one heck of a stay at this place.
The Captain lead me to my assined Zoid. It was a Shadow Fox. I couldn't help but give a wisle to the site of this butty. It was Desert Camo. It had a Gatling gun that had been used already by the looks of the barrel. The Captain said to me in a proud voice "She's a real butty, one of our finniest zoids we have, so take real good care of her and she'll take good care of you." So after the Captain left I hoped into her and took her out on a test run to see if every thing checked out ok. They had four different test arenas. The first was a obstical course. It had twist and turns all over it. I flu through it with eas. The second was a Shooting range. The Fox clear most of them but the long range ones where hard to get. The next was a speed test. it was a strait type track that you could really open your zoid up on. It also had a reader on it so at the end it showed you your best speed. I had to wait dehind some one in a very modified Gun Sniper. It had wheeles on it's foot, two big thrusters, two little thrusters, a machine gun mounted on it's left side. It was fast, way to fast for me. The speed on it was 456.8 km/h. I just staired at it in amasement. So I was up next and as soon as I opened that thing up I was pressed back into my seat. at the end I was just stuned at how fast this thing really is. The next test was a sparing arena. No one was around but that Gun Sniper, so I went up against it and it's piliot. It started of by it opening up with its machine gun. I got hit about four out of the eight rounds it fired at me. when I terned around after the smoke cleared i the Gun Snipe was nowhere to be seen. Then I saw a small shadow over me and looked up to see the thing fling down ready to crush my cockpit so I doged to the left and hamered it with round after round of my Shadow Fox's gatling. It came crashing down with a THUD. The Gun Sniper darted up and very quickly moved up to my cockpit and took aim at it. I quickly swilveled my gatling around. But it was to late the Gun Sniper predicted my move and used it's claws to force back my gatling gun. Gust then a man in a lab coat apperaed out of the shadows and in a harsh, rasping voice said "thats enough.". Good work.
When the cockpit of the Gun Sniper opened a Girl emerged from it. A helmit lay tucked under her arm that had all these wires strapped to it.
The man said "where is your sparing partner?". She replied in a nice, soothing voice "what do you mean?". The man replied "Your partner was suppost to be in a Snipe Master remmber.". "Aaaaa Ooooppps" she replied to the man in the lab coat. She then turned to my cockpit and said "Uuummmmmm Sorry mister". Then she jumped back into the cockpit and ran off and the guy in the lab coat disapered from sight also. That night I layed in bed woundering what could have happened if the man didn't stop that match, and how the Girl was ,and what they where doing here.
So what do you think???
So heres mine. Sorry about the spelling. I don't have Microsoft Word.
CHAPTER I
Fresh meat
Fresh meat
It was a hot day out. Republican soldiers all laying around doing nothing.
I Asual. A boy at a age of 14 and just able to join the Republican Army just got my orders to meat up with my team at a town called Thunder village. It was a small quite little place that sat on the edge of the Republic and the Neo-Zenevas Border. It was a peacefull little town about to be caught up in a battle for a rare zoid. THE MADTHUNDER. I just arrived when the news went out that some arceolgist just unearthed something meraculus. It was a Madthunder. Both The Zenevas and republicv wanted this zoid. I staired at it in amusment. It was a huge zoid. After all the camotion settled down I reported to my squad leader. In his tent he had all sorts of stuff. Pictures of him as a little boy pilioting his first zoid with his father to Him leading a fully armed batalion of a Gojulas MK II, about 12 Godos armed with CP-13's, four Green horn, and about 7 or 8 different Command Wolfs. He look like he was a great leader. But when I saw him he was in what it looked like to be a white t-shirt with torn-to-shreds blue jean shorts on, a gote that conected with his mustash. On his hat that he wore it said "Captian Brooke". I walked up to his desk and handed him my papers. He looked at me and said "So, your the fresh meat, right out of the academy. Says here your name is Asual right?" I snaped him a crisp solute and said "Yes sir" in a clear voice. He caulked a eye brow and said "Losen up, nothens happened around here for years son."
I could tell I was in for one heck of a stay at this place.
CHAPTER II
New Fox
New Fox
The Captain lead me to my assined Zoid. It was a Shadow Fox. I couldn't help but give a wisle to the site of this butty. It was Desert Camo. It had a Gatling gun that had been used already by the looks of the barrel. The Captain said to me in a proud voice "She's a real butty, one of our finniest zoids we have, so take real good care of her and she'll take good care of you." So after the Captain left I hoped into her and took her out on a test run to see if every thing checked out ok. They had four different test arenas. The first was a obstical course. It had twist and turns all over it. I flu through it with eas. The second was a Shooting range. The Fox clear most of them but the long range ones where hard to get. The next was a speed test. it was a strait type track that you could really open your zoid up on. It also had a reader on it so at the end it showed you your best speed. I had to wait dehind some one in a very modified Gun Sniper. It had wheeles on it's foot, two big thrusters, two little thrusters, a machine gun mounted on it's left side. It was fast, way to fast for me. The speed on it was 456.8 km/h. I just staired at it in amasement. So I was up next and as soon as I opened that thing up I was pressed back into my seat. at the end I was just stuned at how fast this thing really is. The next test was a sparing arena. No one was around but that Gun Sniper, so I went up against it and it's piliot. It started of by it opening up with its machine gun. I got hit about four out of the eight rounds it fired at me. when I terned around after the smoke cleared i the Gun Snipe was nowhere to be seen. Then I saw a small shadow over me and looked up to see the thing fling down ready to crush my cockpit so I doged to the left and hamered it with round after round of my Shadow Fox's gatling. It came crashing down with a THUD. The Gun Sniper darted up and very quickly moved up to my cockpit and took aim at it. I quickly swilveled my gatling around. But it was to late the Gun Sniper predicted my move and used it's claws to force back my gatling gun. Gust then a man in a lab coat apperaed out of the shadows and in a harsh, rasping voice said "thats enough.". Good work.
When the cockpit of the Gun Sniper opened a Girl emerged from it. A helmit lay tucked under her arm that had all these wires strapped to it.
The man said "where is your sparing partner?". She replied in a nice, soothing voice "what do you mean?". The man replied "Your partner was suppost to be in a Snipe Master remmber.". "Aaaaa Ooooppps" she replied to the man in the lab coat. She then turned to my cockpit and said "Uuummmmmm Sorry mister". Then she jumped back into the cockpit and ran off and the guy in the lab coat disapered from sight also. That night I layed in bed woundering what could have happened if the man didn't stop that match, and how the Girl was ,and what they where doing here.
So what do you think???
