Post by BusterzeroX on Jul 12, 2004 1:59:03 GMT -5
Hi people this is my first time doing a fan fic so don’t blame me if it’s bad, tell me how to make the rest of the story good at the end of this post because I’m still working on the rest of it. Note that I know nothing about the Neo-Zenevas so don’t blame me if my story is not 100% correct. And remember this has nothing to do with the original battle story
“The year 2100”
A battle was raging at a waste land near the Wind Colony; the war was between the Helic Republic and the Neo-Zenevas Empire. The leader of the Neo-Zenevas is Ryan Masters who pilots an Energy Liger and the leader of the Republic is Ryu Striker who pilots a Liger Zero. Most of the Republic troops have retreat and the same went for the Neo-Zenevas, this left Ryu and Ryan to fight it in an all out showdown.
“You’re going down Ryan!” Ryu yelled as his Liger zero let out a gigantic roar and charged forward with the strike laser claw, “No you mean you’re down!” Ryan yelled as the energy liger charged forward with the forehead spike. The forehead spike penetrated the Liger zero’s right leg armour and the strike laser claw ripped off the Energy Liger’s left wing. Both of the Zoids were severely damaged, most of the Liger Zero’s armour had been ripped off leaving it almost bare and the Energy Liger had lost its wings and its weapons.
As the Liger Zero and the Energy Liger leaped forward for the final blow the ground started to shake and a huge figure rose out of the ground, it was the Deathsaurer. “What’s that?” Ryan said very puzzled
“I don’t know” Ryu replied. The Deathsaurer was preparing the Super Charged Particle Cannon and aimed it at the Liger Zero. “Look out!” Ryan yelled as he charged at the Liger Zero knocking it out of the way of the blast blowing half of the Energy Liger’s body apart. “Why did you do that?” Ryu asked Ryan
“Heh, don’t ask me I my hands just moved on my own,” The Deathsaurer was preparing another Charged Particle Blast. Ryu enraged at this charged at the Deathsaurer at full speed activating the ion booster and charged at the Deathsaurer. The Deathsaurer shot the Charged Particle Cannon that blew the entire left side of the Liger zero up, Ryu knew that it was the end but then he saw a small like dinosaur figure jump and fuse into the Liger, recovering the Liger Zero completely.
Should I continue the fanfic? Plz reply and tell me if its okay
“The year 2100”
A battle was raging at a waste land near the Wind Colony; the war was between the Helic Republic and the Neo-Zenevas Empire. The leader of the Neo-Zenevas is Ryan Masters who pilots an Energy Liger and the leader of the Republic is Ryu Striker who pilots a Liger Zero. Most of the Republic troops have retreat and the same went for the Neo-Zenevas, this left Ryu and Ryan to fight it in an all out showdown.
“You’re going down Ryan!” Ryu yelled as his Liger zero let out a gigantic roar and charged forward with the strike laser claw, “No you mean you’re down!” Ryan yelled as the energy liger charged forward with the forehead spike. The forehead spike penetrated the Liger zero’s right leg armour and the strike laser claw ripped off the Energy Liger’s left wing. Both of the Zoids were severely damaged, most of the Liger Zero’s armour had been ripped off leaving it almost bare and the Energy Liger had lost its wings and its weapons.
As the Liger Zero and the Energy Liger leaped forward for the final blow the ground started to shake and a huge figure rose out of the ground, it was the Deathsaurer. “What’s that?” Ryan said very puzzled
“I don’t know” Ryu replied. The Deathsaurer was preparing the Super Charged Particle Cannon and aimed it at the Liger Zero. “Look out!” Ryan yelled as he charged at the Liger Zero knocking it out of the way of the blast blowing half of the Energy Liger’s body apart. “Why did you do that?” Ryu asked Ryan
“Heh, don’t ask me I my hands just moved on my own,” The Deathsaurer was preparing another Charged Particle Blast. Ryu enraged at this charged at the Deathsaurer at full speed activating the ion booster and charged at the Deathsaurer. The Deathsaurer shot the Charged Particle Cannon that blew the entire left side of the Liger zero up, Ryu knew that it was the end but then he saw a small like dinosaur figure jump and fuse into the Liger, recovering the Liger Zero completely.
Should I continue the fanfic? Plz reply and tell me if its okay