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Post by Saix on Jun 2, 2004 3:26:49 GMT -5
Ah, realistic events, conversations, AND slight insanity to boot! I love how every little detail contributes to the ending. (Poor tree)
Was it meant to be an "um..okay...I won? YAY I WON!" story?
I love it
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Post by Deadborder on Jun 2, 2004 16:46:55 GMT -5
Ah, realistic events, conversations, AND slight insanity to boot! I love how every little detail contributes to the ending. (Poor tree) Was it meant to be an "um..okay...I won? YAY I WON!" story? I love it That's pretty much it... Zogster won. Somehow. He's still not sure how. But thanks for the comments. Gald you liked it... I'm still working at stuff... may write some more... may not... depending how my brain feels.. Rick R. |
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Post by Kavid on Jun 3, 2004 9:31:29 GMT -5
I like it! I mean, who can't like the "nerd who overcomes his fears to realize he's got some talent doing something un-nerdy" storyline? It's fun stuff!
I wouldn't mind reading reading more about Zogster's path of life. His rise to fame, as it were.
And the Leoblaze smacking into a tree! That's funny! ;D
Bravo!
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Post by ROss on Jun 3, 2004 9:59:07 GMT -5
is uncle bob scottish by any chance, coz if he is fae ma neck o the wids then yer gonna need tae gee him mare o an accent ye ken, eh. cuz at the minut he jest soonds lik the sterotipical scotman ye ken like yone mel gibson character, in breave hert eh.any way that a northen scottish accent( aberdeen, perth, edinburgh) , bu i hale fae near glesga(glasgow in central scotland) by the way, and wee have a habit of endin sentences with by the way , by the way. ye know and they end them wae 'eh' liek yone canadians by the way, lol thats funny coz thats how my grampa speaks, i speak normally witha a scottish accent but i do slang though, but that zogster does sound like a bot of an ned.(if ye wanna know what wan o them is then go to www.glasgowsurvival.co.uk then check out the "gallery of neds" it pure brilliand sone it is" |
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Post by Deadborder on Jun 3, 2004 23:33:57 GMT -5
Yeah, Uncle Bob's Scottish, but more of a generic Scottish that's easier for me to write and read. I did consider goign a full-belt Glasweigen, but I figuted that'd jsut make the spellcheck explode, which as oyu can see I'm normally lcose to doing.
Zogster's not a ned. He's jsut a normal scared twit.
Rick R.
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Post by ROss on Jun 4, 2004 3:09:17 GMT -5
if you use uncle bob again you gotta have im shout "gees a gob ye dobber!"( too rude for me to translate on here- pm me if you wanna know), or "haw you shut it ur am pure gonna cum oure there and chib ye own ye coupin way this howf brik, by the way."( be quiet or i'm going to go over to you and smack you round the head with this half brick), or "hod yer wheesht ye wee manky ned", shut your mouth you dirty little ned[ there is no translation for 'ned'  ], those lines come up often when you walk through glasgow, or any town north of the border. so if yeou ever need some scottish insults or phrases, come to me lol ;D |
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], those lines come up often when you walk through glasgow, or any town north of the border. so if yeou ever need some scottish insults or phrases, come to me lol ;D