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Post by Tilly on May 29, 2004 10:10:30 GMT -5
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Post by Deadborder on May 29, 2004 17:31:22 GMT -5
Wheeee!
Nice stuff there. I like a lot. Very well written and nicely chracterised there. And great use of the under-used secondary chracters. I like them.
Go the under-used secondary chracters. They've got lives too, y'know.
mmm... Tasker Sisters... drool....
Rick R.
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Post by Tilly on May 29, 2004 22:45:21 GMT -5
*Lightning Saix attempts to slap Rick*
Hey! No squishing beta-readers!
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skatemonkey89
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Post by skatemonkey89 on May 30, 2004 5:44:40 GMT -5
nice. i dont like it as much as your other story, but your other one was battle-y and fanny. but this one was also kinda funny, but in a serious way. i think... anyway, great job tilly!
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Post by tiny5th on May 30, 2004 6:34:45 GMT -5
only the tiniest complaint, second paragraph, its spelled ''cosy''
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Post by Tilly on May 30, 2004 6:42:33 GMT -5
Dictionary says both...I've always spelled it with a z, myself *shrugs*.
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Post by tiny5th on May 30, 2004 8:12:28 GMT -5
i think thats the american spelling or something cuz ive got a dictionary from way back when we didnt use american words/spellings over here and it doesnt have it with a z
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Post by Tilly on May 30, 2004 9:06:35 GMT -5
Hrm...might be.
My brain seems to have absorbed a few bits and pieces of British English (mostly in spelling)...I wonder what'd happen if I went there for a while.
Other than me being even more likely to use both "saber" and "sabre" in the same paragraph, I mean.
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