Post by Master-666 on May 9, 2004 13:54:53 GMT -5
is this fic worth continuing ?
Suddenly a whale king uncloaked it self some fifty feet above them. Open mouthed Sichael started running he and his father had walked straight into the empires research grounds, how could they have been so stupid. Sachael and his father started running away from the empires forces at last coming to rest in an abandoned cave. Sachael’s father went out side to see if the coast was clear for them to go when, Sachael heard a squishing noise, Sachael looked to see what it was but when he looked there was half his father looking back at him, with his last breath he told Sachael to run. Sachael started running cursing under his breath, tears streaming from his eyes swearing revenge. Before he new it he had already gotten lost, Sachael ran into a green pod which knocked him backwards onto the floor, he heard a hissing noise he got up to see what it was, it was coming from the know opening green pod. A mechanical serpent was now slithering out he recognised it at once to be an organoid.
Suddenly a whale king uncloaked it self some fifty feet above them. Open mouthed Sichael started running he and his father had walked straight into the empires research grounds, how could they have been so stupid. Sachael and his father started running away from the empires forces at last coming to rest in an abandoned cave. Sachael’s father went out side to see if the coast was clear for them to go when, Sachael heard a squishing noise, Sachael looked to see what it was but when he looked there was half his father looking back at him, with his last breath he told Sachael to run. Sachael started running cursing under his breath, tears streaming from his eyes swearing revenge. Before he new it he had already gotten lost, Sachael ran into a green pod which knocked him backwards onto the floor, he heard a hissing noise he got up to see what it was, it was coming from the know opening green pod. A mechanical serpent was now slithering out he recognised it at once to be an organoid.
