LZ ecas pt 2..1 is on custom

[Shayan987]

Meanwhile they were fighting a huge ship came on the planet."captain we have reports that the DS has already destroyed most of the planet!"
"Exellent!!!" they watched it destroy everything...back on the planet...the liger was almost destroyed...van was...all had seem lost...suddenly..*boom*out of the smoke came flying the liger....it stabbed its front blades into the DS...BOOM!! It CAME AND went right out of the DS..it exploded and all of the genos below were burned...they had won the toughest fight....

[Revenant05]

.......................I have an idea, sentences and grammar. That is all.

[Colodie]

Also, please don't use DS. I personally don't like it because it could mean Death Saurer or Death Stinger or Dark Spiner or Double Sworder.

[Deadborder]

NOOOO!

BRIAN... MELTING.. FIC... CAUSING... PAIN... MUST... NOT... BLACK... OUT...

Ahem.

Repeat after me:

I will not post a paragraph of random drivel and pass it off as a fic.

Rick R.

[Saix]

I am very confused...I don't understand one bit of it...