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Post by blademirage2 on Feb 4, 2004 14:17:37 GMT -5
The attack of the death laser
A first hand account by colonel john o` tool of the helic republic army.
Leader of the 1st arc wing division.
Part1 the rising image
The sirens of the base rung load and clear. The over powering voice of the bases computer cried
“Unidentified zoid approaching all personal to battle stations”
I quickly spirant to hanger 01 were my partner* was being kept safe
I climbed in to my cockpit were the over powering smell of cold metal rushed
Though my body. It had been at least a week since I had last been sitting there.
The cockpit slowly closed and as it sealed tight adrenaline rushed though me.
As the hanger door opened the cold light of the desert morning rushed into the
Hanger we (me and the soldiers) could see the shadow of the horrific monstrosity
Like an angle of death it came. With wings of lightening a body of a… of a...
Words can’t describe the sculpt and horror of the monster that lurked in the rising sun…
* A blue custom shadow fox
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Post by blademirage2 on Feb 4, 2004 14:35:15 GMT -5
Part 2 the full onslaught of the monster
“First arc wing division mobilise" I cried over the inter-coms
Many zoids launched. 10 command wolfs 15 gun snipers and me in my
Shadow fox.
At least ten seconds later the monster began to stir.
With incredible speed the monster struck down 5 gun snipers. They stood no chance
Of fighting back.
Slowly as the command wolfs got close enough to launch a front assault on the monster, it did something shocking it’s “wings” collapsed together and began to glow.
From what I could tell it began to charge a CPC. And with a blinding flash there was no more command wolfs. 10 good men gone. I then vowed that I would get revenge….
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Post by steelx on Feb 4, 2004 15:03:54 GMT -5
good fic. kinda short
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Post by blademirage2 on Feb 4, 2004 15:45:17 GMT -5
it`s not finished
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Post by Phenotype on Feb 5, 2004 2:18:32 GMT -5
Who said it has a CPC? You should wait until it comes out before using specific information like that.
-Phenotype
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Post by blademirage2 on Feb 5, 2004 2:46:11 GMT -5
Part 3 Revenge.
Before I knew what I was doing I was changing head first in to the beast it was if the shadow fox sensed my rage. I didn’t know at this point what if it was me or the shadow fox but the “strike laser claw” charged up and I cried “strike laser claw” and struck. After the dust settled I noticed that monster had grabbed the armour just above the claw. Then with a tremendous force the monster launched the fox though the air into the side of a cliff
< Command system freeze>
“Damn”
I watched as the beast began to stir and turn towards the base.
Then in a flash of speed of speed it was in the base and turning it in to a blood bath…..
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Post by blademirage2 on Feb 5, 2004 3:14:01 GMT -5
Who said it has a CPC? -Phenotype sorry but i was just saying it had a cpc because most of the ones that look the bf have one and also i wanted one in my fic |
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Post by Phenotype on Feb 5, 2004 3:48:13 GMT -5
sorry but i was just saying it had a cpc because most of the ones that look the bf have one and also i wanted one in my fic Dark Spiner doesn't. -Phenotype |
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Post by Tilly on Feb 5, 2004 4:06:38 GMT -5
Shhhh. You'll bring that debate down upon our heads...*twitch*
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Post by blademirage2 on Feb 5, 2004 12:08:32 GMT -5
Part 4 the end?
“Help me, help me aaaarrrgggg!” this was one other the most chilling calls over the inter-comm.
Good man were laying down there life to protect the base from the monster.
And then for a couple of seconds there was a chilling silence. Then I noticed what was happening. The monster was in the air and with a tremendous fall it landed and again charged its cannon of death, the charged particle cannon.
“Run you fools don’t defend the base” I tried to call out over the inter-comm but it was no use.
They were helpless. I looked away. I couldn’t bear to look. A blinding flash overtook the sky line then the base was gone. The beast had done its job and with tremendous roar the monster speeded away…..
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Post by blademirage2 on Feb 5, 2004 12:15:35 GMT -5
Part 5 the aftermath
2days……
2 days it took for me to be found by a Gustav pilot who had connections. She took me to the nearest base were I found out the name of the beast.
It was the new neo-zenevas slaughter machine,
The…
DEATH….
LASER….
The end.
so what do you think?
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Post by Deadborder on Feb 10, 2004 5:55:13 GMT -5
I think cabbage smells funny. But I must agree. As tempting as it is, I've been resisting the urge to use Death Laser until I know more about it. And hwile the name is cool and I did slap up fanart based on it within days of the first picture appearing, I still don't know anyhting about it. For all we know, Death Laser could be a common or garden line machine armed with various normal enery weapons and, I don't know, a prune danish. So i'd say that, for the moment, leave it alone and write aobut other Zoids. Like Gator. Nobody ever does a fic about Gator. Rick R. (WHo probably won't either...) |
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Post by Tilly on Feb 10, 2004 11:25:27 GMT -5
*scribbles a mental note to use Gator in a fic somewhere*
Eh he he...
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Post by smerhej2 on Feb 15, 2004 15:52:50 GMT -5
DUDE......DAT WAS SICK!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by Wolfy on Mar 21, 2004 20:41:26 GMT -5
Who said it has a CPC? You should wait until it comes out before using specific information like that. -Phenotype Pheno, Remember what you told me about it being my fic and to do what I want with it when we were discussing my thoughts about the Koeing Wolf evolving from the Command Wolf? I think the same applies. CPC or not, as long as he's writing it, then it doesn't matter if its factual or not, thats what he wants to put in it. I think thats the reason behind fan fiction, but this is just my opinion, so... eh? |
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