intro for my first fanfic.

[shadowzero33]

I was talking about my Fanfic idea with scissorbreaker and he said this would turn out to be a good story. it is a survival/revenge plot. This is what you could say would be the equivalent of a 30 second teaser trailer. if you like it click yes and i will progress this project. i will probably end up making a few customs to go along with the story as well. the title is also in progress.

Opening-
The emergency exit sirens in the cockpit were all i could hear.
the alarm was muffled over the torn cloth and debris from the crash.
i checked the computer. all the pilot screen in the console showed was nothing but codes and a summary of the damage.

!Alert!Alert!Alert!Alert!Alert!
!CSF:error code:83724005!
RZ-009-CW:criticaldamage.
RFL:severe-572085sl4925.
RBL:moderate-587207yw8.
CBT:critical-573ep572958.
LFL:severe-572196tl5002.
LBL:light-58306bx829582.
CPC:Critical-83872gl3871.
*connecting_emercencyHQ*
*connection... .... ... failed..*
*backupconnect... ... failed.*
*errorcode:9583077265...*


Did it leave yet?
Is it gone?

I stepped through the broken glass of the cockpit on the now over-turned command wolf, only to find that i was in a desert looking wasteland. nothing but other dismantled command wolf's of my team lay around. i took a quick glance to see if by chance there were any survivors. its not looking good.

[zetsuboubirri]

it is looking good

[shadowzero33]

Thanks for the positive feedback! ;D (btw, i love DN)