LZ
Lance Corporal
Insainty is not a plauge, but a value. So Death awaits you!
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Post by LZ on Jul 29, 2006 21:51:19 GMT -5
Ohh man! sorry guys! There was a big eletical storm and knocked my computer out! It wouldn't start working till today! I'll get right on the rest of chapter one and post up some of chapter 2 as soon as I can! But the storm also caused my computer to clitch and it deleted some really important documents from my computer. I have to type those up first, then I'll add on okay? Sorry about all this! -bows-
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Post by Vig on Jul 29, 2006 23:06:24 GMT -5
you need to learn to unplug your computer when an electrical storm hits ......
someone I knew had all their tv's and players fried when lightning struck the aerial.... imagine what it'd do to a computer
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LZ
Lance Corporal
Insainty is not a plauge, but a value. So Death awaits you!
Posts: 96
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Post by LZ on Jul 31, 2006 17:34:52 GMT -5
I swore I shut it done..but evidentally I hit -stand by- on accident cause I was running around like crazy trying to turn everything else off!
Well, I got my paper done now!^^ So I'm gonna finish up chapter one now!^^
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LZ
Lance Corporal
Insainty is not a plauge, but a value. So Death awaits you!
Posts: 96
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Post by LZ on Jul 31, 2006 19:41:07 GMT -5
HUH?! Damn! it didn't post! Must be too long for just one post to hold..*%&^*%&$*$*! all that work deleted!
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Post by Vig on Aug 1, 2006 4:40:53 GMT -5
copy and paste my friend copy and paste
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LZ
Lance Corporal
Insainty is not a plauge, but a value. So Death awaits you!
Posts: 96
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Post by LZ on Aug 1, 2006 16:52:55 GMT -5
Okay!! I've finished chapter one!^^
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Post by Vig on Aug 3, 2006 0:11:49 GMT -5
Gee bit cloud brutally murdered... there's something.....guess he probably woud be a pushover in real life..... You've made the story quite dramatic i see.... I also sense it's going somehwhere.... and liger zero may go berserk but would never commit suicide, that rumour is plain stupid.. I could see him running off faraway though...
can I bet you will be the next pilot? Thats not bad, just a guess, .. it's cool
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Post by KAndrw on Aug 3, 2006 0:41:29 GMT -5
It's good. The spelling made my brain bleed, until I got used to it reading like a blog. Then it suddenly seemed like a term paper by a kid in a Planet Zi high school, sticking (probably!) to facts, but dropping out of report-mode when things get emotional: "But that was a load of crap" really made me laugh. I don't know whether that was the style you were aiming for, but it is a *neat* style (albeit hard work to read). It is also a style that sneakily lets you get away with mangling canon if you feel like it - you can simply claim that this is what *history shows*, not necessarily what actually happened
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LZ
Lance Corporal
Insainty is not a plauge, but a value. So Death awaits you!
Posts: 96
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Post by LZ on Aug 3, 2006 15:19:15 GMT -5
Opps..I only spell check the first half the chapter!! -dies- I'll have to go back and fix that!!
Is Dregrith gonna be the next pilot of Liger Zero? Or will her feelings lead her to be destroied by him?
Comming Soon! Chapter2!!
I promise SOON! like in the next few days!^^
Glad you guys approve of it so far^^
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