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Post by Deadborder on May 7, 2004 0:41:36 GMT -5
Well, think it's a great start... defintely one of, if not the best fics I've seen on this MB thus far, and leaving my ilitterate scrawlings for dead.
Nice work on setting up the scene and introducing the chracters. It's a little vauge, but that's deliberate and, in this case, it works. Especially with concealing the Zoid's identiy.
Heh... a sotry featuring your customs? Now that would be cool. Especialyl the Chia-Unenlagia. I don't know why, but I love that ltitle critter.
Rick R.
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Post by uglyzoid on May 7, 2004 15:02:03 GMT -5
I was just kidding: I wish there was a way to denote joking. BTW: Tilly, you are not as bad as my english teacher, he is evil, you're helpful. Also I like to see either the Royal Spider or the Shell Karn Berserker
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Post by Zekey on May 8, 2004 11:19:49 GMT -5
I enjoyed it, and i'm rather interested into what will occur next. Keep up the good stuff.
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Post by Fulano on May 9, 2004 20:36:56 GMT -5
Sweet! thats the least i can say, and if u wanna here me say it all, just ask, lol. Pheno, i suggest u and wolfy make something so kickass it'll knock the crap outa us! I'm serious though, u and wolfy would make a good team! ;D Ryu
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Post by Phenotype on May 10, 2004 0:45:12 GMT -5
Sweet! thats the least i can say, and if u wanna here me say it all, just ask, lol. Pheno, i suggest u and wolfy make something so kickass it'll knock the crap outa us! I'm serious though, u and wolfy would make a good team! ;D Ryu That's actually not a bad idea, Wolfster? -Phenotype
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Post by Wolfy on May 10, 2004 9:39:51 GMT -5
Well... I was planning on adding NeXus later on, like as the final boss, but It would be interesting to follow that aswell as Silver Moon, Since they are about equal. Kinda like how Chaotic Century kinda follows both Raven and Van.
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Post by Wolfy on May 10, 2004 9:49:18 GMT -5
hmm.... while reading it at first i thought liger 0. then i thought konig wolf. yay! i was hoping ud make a fanfic about the... whats iits called again? i forgot.... anyway, great job man! The Koeing Wolf is MY thang. Good job Pheno! I saw who made this fic and I was all like... " O.O PHENO WROTE A FANFIC! HOLY SHIZZLE!"
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Post by Dark OutCast on May 10, 2004 14:06:56 GMT -5
Thats was pretty good for your first one mine was a piece of crud
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Post by steelx on May 10, 2004 16:38:37 GMT -5
that was cool nizzle
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Post by littlebro on May 10, 2004 17:06:17 GMT -5
MORE!!!
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Post by EmperorG on May 10, 2004 17:14:56 GMT -5
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Post by skatemonkey89 on May 10, 2004 18:17:01 GMT -5
quote: O.O PHENO WROTE A FANFIC! HOLY SHIZZLE!" :end quote
haha wolvy, that made my day. lmao.
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Post by Wolfy on May 10, 2004 20:38:08 GMT -5
thats the third time i've heard that today O.o
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Post by Phenotype on May 11, 2004 0:26:15 GMT -5
Good job Pheno! I saw who made this fic and I was all like... " O.O PHENO WROTE A FANFIC! HOLY SHIZZLE!" Hehe, thanks. I figured I collect the models, I do customs, I have the site, and the forum, I might as well take a crack at writing a fic too. ;D -Phenotype
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Post by Tilly on May 11, 2004 3:07:30 GMT -5
Now, you just need to draw some Zoids...
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