rapter
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ooo!!!explosives i love explosives!!!he!he!he!i mean hoo else would play ring around the pipebomb:)
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Post by rapter on Mar 14, 2004 16:20:22 GMT -5
the mission starts out.......parker and fox were on a mission to defend the(see title)parker stop shootin at me said fox well shouldnt the enemy be here by now i said if the enemy were here youd be dead right now fox said whata ya mean by that i said i told you to use the death stinger insteada your old beat down rusty blade raptor(custom rev raptor)fox said well u think there gona be ariel units in your stupid ariel defense canon tortis thingy i said and wheres that new pilot colonel said hes pretty good in his gun sniper.......
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Post by Tilly on Mar 15, 2004 4:49:14 GMT -5
It needs punctuation ^_^;...
Also, you need to start a new paragraph when someone new is speaking.
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Post by Zeropioneer on Mar 18, 2004 21:15:09 GMT -5
Um... That name sounds oddly familiar...  |
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Post by LordGale on Mar 24, 2004 11:59:32 GMT -5
What?
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Post by Phenotype on Mar 24, 2004 12:05:22 GMT -5
Anyone else think I should just delete this?
-Phenotype
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Post by DeathSaurer12 on Mar 24, 2004 16:04:59 GMT -5
Anyone else think I should just delete this? -Phenotype I do, I do! j/k ;D |
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Post by LordGale on Mar 24, 2004 23:31:19 GMT -5
Please do. Is this guy really 14?
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Raven
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Post by Raven on Mar 24, 2004 23:32:43 GMT -5
Anyone else think I should just delete this? -Phenotype same here |
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Post by Colodie on Mar 24, 2004 23:40:28 GMT -5
Anyone else think I should just delete this? -Phenotype How about you make it a rule that you have to at least use correct grammar and such to post fanfics? I don't mean sick Ironwing on them, but at least have capital letters, periods, paragraphs, etc, and run it through a spell checker. |
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Post by LT sullivan on Mar 24, 2004 23:47:03 GMT -5
Please do. Is this guy really 14? lol!!! 14!!!!! parker what have you been telling these people look exploding what ever his name happens to be at the time is only... hmm should i really tell |
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Post by Tilly on Mar 24, 2004 23:49:05 GMT -5
You could sic me on them instead!
A length requirement might be good too-like more than a few paragraphs. Unless it's a drabble, which is a challenge in itself (exactly 100 words).
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aqouli
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Wicked lil' foxie!
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Post by aqouli on Mar 25, 2004 1:16:49 GMT -5
Drabbles!
... Oh wait, I don't do drabbles.
They're pretty hard, nonetheless. 100 words isn't a terrible lot.
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Post by Deadborder on Mar 25, 2004 5:19:03 GMT -5
How about you make it a rule that you have to at least use correct grammar and such to post fanfics? I don't mean sick Ironwing on them, but at least have capital letters, periods, paragraphs, etc, and run it through a spell checker. Dude, if you did that, he'd kill someone. Or explode. Or both. (pause) COOL! Rick R. |
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Post by LordGale on Mar 25, 2004 19:47:14 GMT -5
What do you guys mean sick Ironwing on 'im? Length reqirements would be bad, though, since my chapters vary wildly from 2 pages of notebook paper to around 10. A grammar reqirement would work, as long as it was for cases like this and not minor typos. And might I ask what the heck is with this guy's name? Sano was a badass, especially in the manga, but he never exploded.
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Post by Colodie on Mar 26, 2004 14:36:05 GMT -5
Reference to the ZoidFans group. There's a guy there named Ironwing, I think he might be an English professor or teacher, or perhaps that's my mind making stuff up. Anyways, he'll go after people every now and then if they use atrocious grammar.
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thanx to andy fo da lil blitz hornet
