Post by Kouga on Feb 13, 2004 17:38:09 GMT -5
Ok guys (and gals) here's my fan fic...it's my first, so tell me whatcha think about it....and it DOESN'T follow the battel story, it follows Guardin Force.and yes, there will be more chapters
Chapter 1 "Zenevas Returns"
It has been many years since the Guylos/Helic War. As you may know, right before the war, the Guylos Empire took over the Zenevas Empire. Now, Van and Fiona have been married for two years. Moonbay and Irvine have been married for three. After defeating the Deathsaurer, Van's Blade Liger has evolved into the Blade Liger Mirage, which has a 92% power increase. Zeke, Van's organoid, has also changed. He is about twice as big as before, and has two rows of spines along his back. He is so powerful that when he fuses with a Zoid, he brings out the full potential, and actually adds more pontential to that Zoid! Van and Raven have also became very close friends, almost as close as brothers. Shadow, Raven's organoid, is larger but has no changes to his design. He has the same effect as Zeke now has. Raven's Geno Breaker has also evolved into the Geno Breaker Jet, which has a 85% power increase. As you can see, much has changed.
One night, Van was on the computer. Fiona walks out of the bathroom, having just taken a bath. "I'm going to bed, are you coming?" asks Fiona. "Nah, I guess I'll stay up a bit, okay babe?"he replies. "okay." As Van continues looking at new parts for his Zoid, General Carl Schubalz barges in, a frightened expression on his face. "Major Van, they....they have returned!!"exclaims Carl. "who has returned, asks Van. "The, the Zenevas Empire; their army is GIGANTIC!!" tells Carl. "Have they opened fire on us?" asks Van. "Yes," replies Carl, "they have obliterated or Guardsman Coalition!!" Suddenly, Fiona wakes. "What's wrong, Van?" asks Fiona. "nothing, get some rest,"says Van. "So, Carl, since they have attacked us first, send our Seventh Division."says Van. "Sir, yes, sir," says Carl. They solute each other, then Carl leaves to gather the Seventh Division.
About 30 min. later, the Seventh Division, including, Van, Raven, Carl, and rows and rows of very powerful Zoids, line the field. "Where are they?" asks Van."Maybe they chickened out," replies Raven, cockily."No, look," says Carl. Suddenly, you see rows upon rows of Zenevas Imperial Zoids. "They must have been using stealth capabilities,"says Van. Then, the emporer of the newly formed empire appears on the screens. "How do you like my empire? I mean, you really don't think I would form an empire without a grand army, do you?" he says. "Who are you, and why did you attack us??" demands Van. "I, am Emporer Christopher C. Troupe of the Zenevas Empire.We have attacked you because you have formed an alliance with our enemy, the Guylos Empire." Just the, the first shot is fired, but no one knows where it came from. "CHARGE!!!!" exclaims both sides. Opposing Zoids run at each other, some defeating, some being defeated. Van and Raven tear through enemy Zoids like paper. "carl, you still standing?' asks Van. " No, the Deathbelow's left leg is damaged, and I have a command system freeze!!" he replies. After hours of fighting, Van and Chris call back their few remaining Zoids. "I guess it comes down to this one on one, eh?" asks Chris. "Yes, yes it does," replies Van," but you'll still lose, I assure you!" "Yeah, right," says Chris, cockily. "GRAAAAAAHHH!!" exclaims Van, as he charges forward. "Fool!" says Chris, " I knew you would use the blade attack." As Van chages forward, the Sturm Tyrann's buster claw catches the Blade Liger Mirage. He cuts the B.L.M badly, and slams it onto a rock. It then experiences a command system freeze. "NO!!" says Van. "Haha, I'll spare you today," says Chris. The Zenevas Empire had won the first battle. "YOU MAY HAVE ONE THE FIRST BATTLE, BUT WE'LL BE BACK!!!!" exclaimes Van as he and his forces march in retreat back to the Helic capitol. "Sure ya will." says Chris. "WE WON!!!" says all the army men.
To Be Continued In Chapter Two
Chapter 1 "Zenevas Returns"
It has been many years since the Guylos/Helic War. As you may know, right before the war, the Guylos Empire took over the Zenevas Empire. Now, Van and Fiona have been married for two years. Moonbay and Irvine have been married for three. After defeating the Deathsaurer, Van's Blade Liger has evolved into the Blade Liger Mirage, which has a 92% power increase. Zeke, Van's organoid, has also changed. He is about twice as big as before, and has two rows of spines along his back. He is so powerful that when he fuses with a Zoid, he brings out the full potential, and actually adds more pontential to that Zoid! Van and Raven have also became very close friends, almost as close as brothers. Shadow, Raven's organoid, is larger but has no changes to his design. He has the same effect as Zeke now has. Raven's Geno Breaker has also evolved into the Geno Breaker Jet, which has a 85% power increase. As you can see, much has changed.
One night, Van was on the computer. Fiona walks out of the bathroom, having just taken a bath. "I'm going to bed, are you coming?" asks Fiona. "Nah, I guess I'll stay up a bit, okay babe?"he replies. "okay." As Van continues looking at new parts for his Zoid, General Carl Schubalz barges in, a frightened expression on his face. "Major Van, they....they have returned!!"exclaims Carl. "who has returned, asks Van. "The, the Zenevas Empire; their army is GIGANTIC!!" tells Carl. "Have they opened fire on us?" asks Van. "Yes," replies Carl, "they have obliterated or Guardsman Coalition!!" Suddenly, Fiona wakes. "What's wrong, Van?" asks Fiona. "nothing, get some rest,"says Van. "So, Carl, since they have attacked us first, send our Seventh Division."says Van. "Sir, yes, sir," says Carl. They solute each other, then Carl leaves to gather the Seventh Division.
About 30 min. later, the Seventh Division, including, Van, Raven, Carl, and rows and rows of very powerful Zoids, line the field. "Where are they?" asks Van."Maybe they chickened out," replies Raven, cockily."No, look," says Carl. Suddenly, you see rows upon rows of Zenevas Imperial Zoids. "They must have been using stealth capabilities,"says Van. Then, the emporer of the newly formed empire appears on the screens. "How do you like my empire? I mean, you really don't think I would form an empire without a grand army, do you?" he says. "Who are you, and why did you attack us??" demands Van. "I, am Emporer Christopher C. Troupe of the Zenevas Empire.We have attacked you because you have formed an alliance with our enemy, the Guylos Empire." Just the, the first shot is fired, but no one knows where it came from. "CHARGE!!!!" exclaims both sides. Opposing Zoids run at each other, some defeating, some being defeated. Van and Raven tear through enemy Zoids like paper. "carl, you still standing?' asks Van. " No, the Deathbelow's left leg is damaged, and I have a command system freeze!!" he replies. After hours of fighting, Van and Chris call back their few remaining Zoids. "I guess it comes down to this one on one, eh?" asks Chris. "Yes, yes it does," replies Van," but you'll still lose, I assure you!" "Yeah, right," says Chris, cockily. "GRAAAAAAHHH!!" exclaims Van, as he charges forward. "Fool!" says Chris, " I knew you would use the blade attack." As Van chages forward, the Sturm Tyrann's buster claw catches the Blade Liger Mirage. He cuts the B.L.M badly, and slams it onto a rock. It then experiences a command system freeze. "NO!!" says Van. "Haha, I'll spare you today," says Chris. The Zenevas Empire had won the first battle. "YOU MAY HAVE ONE THE FIRST BATTLE, BUT WE'LL BE BACK!!!!" exclaimes Van as he and his forces march in retreat back to the Helic capitol. "Sure ya will." says Chris. "WE WON!!!" says all the army men.
To Be Continued In Chapter Two