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Post by LordGale on Jan 23, 2004 23:14:08 GMT -5
The Berserk Fury stirred. Something had jolted it's underwater tomb, knocking the zoid awake. It's consciousness drifted between it's own and that of the organoid within it's heart. "How long has it been since Raven died?" This was the one thought that they had shared since they were both entombed in the middle of this ocean. As this thought drifted into their minds for what felt like the thousandth time, something punctured the wall of the container. A dart flew in, piercing the Fury in the side. As the special tranquilizers in the dart took effect, the Fury saw light for the first time in 500 years. As it drifted into a relaxed slumber, the tomb raised slowly from the depths.....
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Post by LordGale on Jan 23, 2004 23:21:27 GMT -5
This lil' fic is meant to go along with my grand NC/0 fic, which is still being worked on. Please critique, and be scathing if you find it necessary The two other parts of this will be added later as Zoids:Memories Second
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Post by zudo on Jan 29, 2004 17:34:01 GMT -5
nice, cept tranquilizers? he a machine they should habe him temporarly shory circuited
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Post by LordGale on Jan 30, 2004 22:39:37 GMT -5
Semi-Organic-ish-y machine ;D
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Post by smerhej2 on Feb 15, 2004 15:57:16 GMT -5
pretty good...nice title...9 outta 10
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