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Post by Shizuhara on Jan 1, 2012 1:13:51 GMT -5
Posted on FF.net www.fanfiction.net/s/7696562/1/ A short story, written in a new style...though I liked it. It was a bit of an exercise with quote use that turned into a keeper. |
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Post by Maethius on Jan 4, 2012 10:46:42 GMT -5
Read it and loved it. Again, it's a very different perspective. I think it works best as either a short or a "flash back" intro for a longer story, but on its own it rocks.  |
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Post by Shizuhara on Jan 12, 2012 22:04:21 GMT -5
I decided to flex my short story muscle and continue with a chapter two - www.fanfiction.net/s/7696562/2/. The lead voice is different and thus the tone changes a bit, but in the end I liked the result. Starting to see how 500 words can be pretty long after all. |
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Post by Maethius on Jan 13, 2012 11:41:57 GMT -5
Definitely a different tone... almost slapstick (and very anime). You are becoming quite articulate. |
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Post by Shizuhara on Jan 15, 2012 23:30:09 GMT -5
For some reason, articulate made me think of a really intense game of Twister, but thanks. With chapter three, I wanted to start tying things together. I'm still debating on whether to reprise the situation from a second PoV. www.fanfiction.net/s/7696562/3/ |
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