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Post by ROss on Jan 27, 2005 8:11:37 GMT -5
i didn't really like the origionla so i'm not really a fan of this- as i feel by giving a zoid a humanoid form it then no longer is a zoid in my eyes- thats why i dunn really like lord gale thing either. saying that your colour scheme is a more pleasent than the origional and the gun is better.- exactly how many gundams did you maul to make this custom, wei've got the talgeese, the legs come from one if the gundams from endless waltz- sand rock rerhaps, the gunn looks like a modified buster rifle form wing 0 custom, and the arm the sheild is mounted on looks kinnlike one of the shenlong/altron arms. and is that the uzi from sandrock as well, ans the forearm blade from heavy arms?. the shoulders need the holes at the back filled or you could just reattach the verner thrusters- a flying iguan ooohh the horror. the paint job looks ok, smooth but i looks a little rough in some areas, and its a bit messy in others like round the sheild, if i were you i'd have if i really had my heart set on reusing the talgeese embalum i'd have masked it of the painted it. as for the stickering as with the sheildy you done they should really have been trimmed a fair bit. although I'm not keen on people out right recreating some one elses custom. yours would have been better than the origional only iff it had been done with the same amount of finesse as the origional.
JAff
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Post by Transbot9 on Jan 27, 2005 10:38:14 GMT -5
It's an ugly knock-off of someone else's bad idea for a custom. At least the origenal had fairly good exicution...this one is just sloppy.
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Post by ROss on Jan 27, 2005 12:48:39 GMT -5
umm you lot know what i'm like with the art critisim, do you think i should start criting the customs too, coz i think i've got a bit of a kindred spirit here in transbot9. lol finally some one else who aint too afraid to just be blunt. i fink i may be contagious.
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Post by RaVeMaSter_VaN on Jan 28, 2005 0:36:01 GMT -5
sure , its ok , i juz wan to noe the mistakes to learn better , so fire ya worst ;D
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Post by Celestine on Jan 28, 2005 4:55:10 GMT -5
* Waste of a Gundam
* Could have a nicer paint job finish. I've finally realised why you always use such odd colours.
Its because you cant ever get a clean finish, so you opt for colours that hide your flaws. Furthermore, you cover up your flaws with heavy coats of drybrushing.
* You should also practice painting. Not onto a model, but onto a piece of waste plastic.
* Agreed with Juno on the putty on the back
* Could learn to remove mold lines (since you're painting the entire model), as they stick out like a sore thumb if sprayed and heavily drybrushed.
* If you're using the drybrushing for an excuse for weathering - learn do to it the right way.
Hope the next time you post, you can fix up the flaws I've mentioned and dont drybrush so heavily. Instead use a nice BRIGHT colour such as white and make it sweaky clean.
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Post by Transbot9 on Feb 4, 2005 1:11:01 GMT -5
sure , its ok , i juz wan to noe the mistakes to learn better , so fire ya worst ;D Go to a book store and buy The New St. Martin's Handbook (ISBN 0-312-39552-3). I know my grammer online can be sloppy at times, but at least people can usually understand it. You're getting quite illegible.
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Post by NinjaWolf on Feb 4, 2005 17:14:37 GMT -5
your customs are very human-like. you should call them Humanoids! (very bad joke, i know) good custom anyway!
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Post by Darth Daniel on Feb 8, 2005 5:56:09 GMT -5
ZOID ON! Darth Daniel
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Post by ped on Feb 8, 2005 14:07:28 GMT -5
Over-all build, I actually like it better than the original, but I honestly think you could actually add some personal touches to make your custom more unique. But over-all, execution wise, i think its an improvement from your madcat. Darth on. ped
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